I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson, Ms Naicker and ms Kirkpatrick.
I think the language you have used in your comparison chart is fantastic, Teharangi. You have clearly explained to us (your audience) the dangers each character was facing and how they might have felt about it. Maybe next time include a photo of your subject. It would be nice to know what Huria looked like so we can have an image of this brave heroine.
I think the language you have used in your comparison chart is fantastic, Teharangi. You have clearly explained to us (your audience) the dangers each character was facing and how they might have felt about it.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time include a photo of your subject. It would be nice to know what Huria looked like so we can have an image of this brave heroine.