Friday 8 November 2013

moon light

Choose a picture from the following, and write a narrative story about it.




Start here:
It was dark and cold some teenagers went camping.
The youngest  ones name was Pearl. She was very calm like the river sometimes pearl would talk to the moon. Her best friend Jamie thought she was a bit of a nut job but Pearl didn't care, she would just say you are  just jealous!!!



While she was with her  friends they heard a noise rustle in the bushes they were really scared because their were only  two boys and their names were, John and Jake.  So they went straight to bed though Pearl never got to talk to the moon outside she talked to the moon from in her tent  and said to the moon “ Oh wonderful white moon sorry I cannot talk to you out there but I can see your shine glimmer through my tent I can feel you shimmer  in the black dark sky good night.”.


Pearl closed her eyes. And fell asleep but that night the moon started to talk to Pearl but all pearl heard was “help” in a quiet voice.  And the moon floated away.

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