I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson, Ms Naicker and ms Kirkpatrick.
Today we had a fun day down at the Point England reserve joining together with the Manaiakalani schools to sing and welcome some guests that have came from Hawaii.
Wow Te Harangi you have come up with some great metaphors to describe different events at Malama Honua, tino pai rawa atu/awesome! You have painted a beautiful picture of the beach setting and the singing, I especially like "the sound of the water dancing to our singing." Remember to proofread your work before posting it, especially for spelling and to make sure all your sentences make sense.
Wow Te Harangi you have come up with some great metaphors to describe different events at Malama Honua, tino pai rawa atu/awesome! You have painted a beautiful picture of the beach setting and the singing, I especially like "the sound of the water dancing to our singing."
ReplyDeleteRemember to proofread your work before posting it, especially for spelling and to make sure all your sentences make sense.